hey guys, im making a new story about the azn possie:
this is the layout so far:
people in possie: me, michelle, yanan, helen, alex, gary, joseph, james
our powers: me-water
michelle-earth
helen-wind/air
yanan-invisibilty
gary-fire
alex-height(he can grow tall and crush people)
james-spells
joseph-strength(macho man!:) )
characters not in possie: kevin, mary, anna, claudia
summary so far: azn possie orphans get powers and place to live mystically. Then a mysterious person (Claudia) tells them about a sacred treasure in China. They go find it, and along the way they meet many "obstacles". They realize that someone else (Kevin and others) is also after the treasure.......and also after them(because of powers). When they finally reach the treasure, it isn't what they thought. It had something to do with love, and michelle and joseph accidently touched it at the same time, and THEN THEY LIKED EACH OTHER! ITS A HAPPY ENDING! (MICHELLE DONT BE EMBARRASSED) (AND IF ANYONE IS READING THIS, MY STORY IS JUST FOR PRETEND. IT ISN'T TRUE (THE MICHELLE AND JOSEPH PART) IN REAL LIFE IT ISN'T LIKE THAT. SO STOP SPREADING RUMORS).
so yah
comment pleez on how to make story better. im starting it today
11 comments:
Hey, it's your story, what can I say?
................................................. thanks jenny :D
$*^&(*#@&^(#*@^&(*@#&^@#*%&@#^*%&!@^(%*#&@#)!#^@@#%@#%@#$!@ghr$#%&*@#^%&@#^(*%&@#^%(*@#&%^*@#&^(^(#@*^_!@%(@!*%@!+!#@*^#@!&*&%^@#*&%^!*(&%@#^*(%&!@^(*%&!@^(*4366324*#$(^&#$@*#^@^&@#*^@#&*^@#*&^#@*&o yea. kevin's in the azn possse too
i lik it!!! :D but...its truuuu!! y didnt u put everyone thats in the posse in ur story??(kevin and anna) o.o
U FORGOT ME AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(
NO I DIDN'T
I SAID CHARACTERS NOT IN POSSIE: KEVIN, ANNA, MARY!
SO U ALWAYS FORGET ME:(
no i didn't!!!!!!
i just needed someone to betray the bad people and be a spy!!!!
yeah.....sure u can say that but rly u forgot me
Gawd anNa. u dont get it. ur a good person but act bad to be a spy. ull be in it next time... RIGHT JENNY?
hey
its my story
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