hi guys! hoped you like chapter 1! and alex, im still italicizing. :P this is where i describe everyone.
There was a moment of silent confusion as random people woke up others around them, and then people started pushing and shoving. I never knew Asians could be so violent.
Anyways, Joseph stumbled out first, his glasses crooked, wearing yellow basketball shorts, a cap, sneakers, and a t-shirt. Plus a drawstring bag and one of those big watches that are all fancy (no clue why he wears that...they're not even waterproof). LOL, michelle, remember those shorts? :D SORRY JOSEPH, IF YOU LOVE YOUR WATCH.
Michelle tripped out after this other guy, and crashed into him. (She's kind of a klutz.) IT'S TRUE, MICHELLE! SORRY! :)
"HEY! Watch it!"
"Um. Sorry?" Michelle said. She had her hair down to her shoulders, and was wearing a Camp Challenge t-shirt (I guess she thought it was funny...), black tennis shorts, sneakers, a watch, and a drawstring bag.
Then, as Gary was pushing and shoving ahead of me, unknowingly giving me a clear path, :P I saw these 6 Asians from my school. It's you guys!! :D They have like, their own little group, and we have our's. I guess it would be cool if we joined together and made this HUGE ASIAN POSSE, but...we never cross paths. It's funny how I sometimes wish we did, since our group doesn't even know them. LOL. IT'S CALLED IRONY!! SEE, AREN'T I BECOMING A BETTER WRITER? :P
My attention went back to the bus violence, as I was nearing the end. Gary got out, wearing a t-shirt, basketball shorts, tennis shoes, and a drawstring bag.
Finally, finally, I stepped out, too, wearing a t-shirt, basketball shorts (MY NIKE ONES! REMEMBER?!) glasses, Nike shoes, and a watch. (It's funny how we Asians wear pretty much the same thing.)
I walked over to wear my friends wear waiting for me, and we lounged around the parking lot, not knowing what to do. Later a group of adults came and led us off to nerd camp. I was so excited! :D
Yanan, Mary, Helen, Kevin, James, and Alex came out of the bus 1 by 1.
"You know, they should let sexy people like me come out first," Alex criticized. haha...isn't that totally what he'd say? right alex?? i bet you'd say that. :P
James raised his eyebrows. "The only reason they'd let you out first is because you're short," he snickered. SORRY! BUT THAT'S SOOOO TRUE! :( don't get mad at me! please!
It WAS true, though. Alex was really short, even shorter than Gary. SORRRYYYY! D: He was Vietnamese.
James, on the other hand, was tall, wearing glasses, and having that look where you always read. OMG, SORRY AGAIN!! D: do. not. get. mad. :)
Yanan had glasses and a confused look, because Helen was talking to Mary about Orchestra. Helen had her hair down, and Mary did, too. They pretty much looked the same, except Helen had glasses, and Mary was Phillipino. The majority fo them were Chinese.
"So...what do you guys want to do?" Kevin asked.
Helen shot him a seductive look. (She was really pervy.)
"This is going to be a really fun summer," Mary snickered.
There was an awkward silence, and then everyone burst out laughing.
Ok, that's it! sorry, it was kinda boring again, but i have to explain everything for those not in the story, incase they accidentally read it. :) please comment, and take a look around my blog! :) vote on polls, etc. and you can comment on the first chapter, too. btw, im not gonna be posting this quick every time, so please don't get mad. ok, thanks for reading! :D
Thursday, July 30, 2009
Friday, July 24, 2009
UNTITLED STORY - CHAPTER ONE.
"Hiii Jennyy..." Gary said, with a creepy smile.
"Stop it! You've been freaking me out for the past hour!!>.<"
I was stuck with Gary for a 2 hour long bus ride. We were sitting together, and I have NO CLUE why. Our last names weren't even close!
Anyways, today's the last day of school, and we're stuck on the crappy bus on the way to nerd camp, where we'll do schoolwork for the WHOLE summer, and then ride this bus back home, where we'll rest for a week before going back to school. AGAIN.
"OMG Jenny! Aren't you just SO EXCITED?" (Gary was trying to act like a girl. It's like a thing that we had going on last year.)
I managed a fake smile. "Sure. It's like a nerd's paradise. Too bad I'm NOT A NERD!!"
"WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!" exclaimed Gary. "You're the one who wanted to come here in the first place!!"
"Ok, fine, I am excited. But...I hope we get weekends off." Hi, guys, it's Jenny! :D Whenever I'm italicized, that means it's not part of the story. But anyways, sorry about the last sentence. Couldn't think of what else to write. :-/ 'Cause it was true. I WAS excited. And my parents DID first introdue this whole nerd camp thing to my friends' parents. And I know I TRY to sound un-nerdy, but...I'm just really into all this school-related stuff. It's like, that's just who I am. Like some people have an inner hippie, or whatever, I have an inner nerd.
The bus screeched at the stoplights, and my head hit the window.
"AGH!" Haha, isn't that so realistic??
"At least YOU didn't almost fall into the aisle," Gary said. I kind of blanked out for a moment, and then I was like, "Oh, yeah. 'Cause you're in the aisle seat...and..." (I have my moments, ok?) Then Gary game me one of those weird smiles where he squints and tries to lok cute. "Check out Michelle and Joseph," he said. "I bet they're flirting over there." SORRY, SORRY!!! DON'T HATE ME!!! BUT IT IS REALISTIC, ISN'T IT?!?!
We craned our heads over the tops of the seats to look at our friends, Joseph and Michelle, at the front of the bus. Michelle was staring stormily out the window, and Joseph was texting.
"What are they doing?!" Gary hissed. "I can't see! Some nerdy kid's head is in my way." lol, the nerdy kid is another character. see what I did there?? :P
It's really weird, because Gary's shorter than me. And Joseph and I are the same height, and Michelle's the tallest. It's like they haven't gotten their growth spurt, or something, even though we're going into 8th grade... I'M KIDDING! IT'S FOR THE STORY'S SAKE!! DON'T HATE ME!! BTW, a little note. the story's not gonna really be funny in the first few chapters. i have to EXPLAIN everything. so yeah.
Michelle and I always make jokes about their height, though, so it doesn't really hurt their feelings anymore. :P
"You should really get taller," I smirked at Gary. "But since I'm so very nice, I'll tell you that Michelle and Joseph are ignoring each other." Which isn't so weird, since they had a relationship together in 6th grade which didn't turn out so well...
The rest of the bus ride was spent chatting and joking with Gary, until he crashed. (He had a Monster before the ride.) ISN'T THAT SO REALISTIC?!?!? some of you might not get it, but if you were there for the july 4th fireworks, you'd know. :P
Then I thought of what we were gonna do at nerd camp. Because, like I said, I couldn't help it. :) I know, sorry, lame ending...but....ugh.
"Haha, did you hear what that shorty said, Kevin?"
"No, James. I don't care. I'm taking screenshots, which is formal for screenscans. Or something like that. Wanna see?"
"He called you a nerdy kid!"
"Well, doi, he is a nerdy kid. Who else brings a MAC to camp?"
"Stop it! You've been freaking me out for the past hour!!>.<"
I was stuck with Gary for a 2 hour long bus ride. We were sitting together, and I have NO CLUE why. Our last names weren't even close!
Anyways, today's the last day of school, and we're stuck on the crappy bus on the way to nerd camp, where we'll do schoolwork for the WHOLE summer, and then ride this bus back home, where we'll rest for a week before going back to school. AGAIN.
"OMG Jenny! Aren't you just SO EXCITED?" (Gary was trying to act like a girl. It's like a thing that we had going on last year.)
I managed a fake smile. "Sure. It's like a nerd's paradise. Too bad I'm NOT A NERD!!"
"WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!" exclaimed Gary. "You're the one who wanted to come here in the first place!!"
"Ok, fine, I am excited. But...I hope we get weekends off." Hi, guys, it's Jenny! :D Whenever I'm italicized, that means it's not part of the story. But anyways, sorry about the last sentence. Couldn't think of what else to write. :-/ 'Cause it was true. I WAS excited. And my parents DID first introdue this whole nerd camp thing to my friends' parents. And I know I TRY to sound un-nerdy, but...I'm just really into all this school-related stuff. It's like, that's just who I am. Like some people have an inner hippie, or whatever, I have an inner nerd.
The bus screeched at the stoplights, and my head hit the window.
"AGH!" Haha, isn't that so realistic??
"At least YOU didn't almost fall into the aisle," Gary said. I kind of blanked out for a moment, and then I was like, "Oh, yeah. 'Cause you're in the aisle seat...and..." (I have my moments, ok?) Then Gary game me one of those weird smiles where he squints and tries to lok cute. "Check out Michelle and Joseph," he said. "I bet they're flirting over there." SORRY, SORRY!!! DON'T HATE ME!!! BUT IT IS REALISTIC, ISN'T IT?!?!
We craned our heads over the tops of the seats to look at our friends, Joseph and Michelle, at the front of the bus. Michelle was staring stormily out the window, and Joseph was texting.
"What are they doing?!" Gary hissed. "I can't see! Some nerdy kid's head is in my way." lol, the nerdy kid is another character. see what I did there?? :P
It's really weird, because Gary's shorter than me. And Joseph and I are the same height, and Michelle's the tallest. It's like they haven't gotten their growth spurt, or something, even though we're going into 8th grade... I'M KIDDING! IT'S FOR THE STORY'S SAKE!! DON'T HATE ME!! BTW, a little note. the story's not gonna really be funny in the first few chapters. i have to EXPLAIN everything. so yeah.
Michelle and I always make jokes about their height, though, so it doesn't really hurt their feelings anymore. :P
"You should really get taller," I smirked at Gary. "But since I'm so very nice, I'll tell you that Michelle and Joseph are ignoring each other." Which isn't so weird, since they had a relationship together in 6th grade which didn't turn out so well...
The rest of the bus ride was spent chatting and joking with Gary, until he crashed. (He had a Monster before the ride.) ISN'T THAT SO REALISTIC?!?!? some of you might not get it, but if you were there for the july 4th fireworks, you'd know. :P
Then I thought of what we were gonna do at nerd camp. Because, like I said, I couldn't help it. :) I know, sorry, lame ending...but....ugh.
"Haha, did you hear what that shorty said, Kevin?"
"No, James. I don't care. I'm taking screenshots, which is formal for screenscans. Or something like that. Wanna see?"
"He called you a nerdy kid!"
"Well, doi, he is a nerdy kid. Who else brings a MAC to camp?"
"Shut up, Alex. It's a nerd camp. I can bring all the Macs I want there."
"I don't even know what I'm doing here. I'm SO not a nerd. Nerds don't have spazzy moments like me."
"It's ok, Yanan. Everyone can be dumb sometimes. Your problem is just for the rest of your life. :P" JUST KIDDING! BUT THAT IS TOTALLY REALISTIC, YOU HAVE TO AGREE WITH ME.
"Shut up, Mary. You're not helping here."
"BUT IT IS TRUE, RIGHT?!"
"I agree with Helen, Yanan. You're just not cut out for a nerdy lifestyle. You should go to spaz camp."
"You know what, Kevin? I wouldn't be talking if I were you. At least I didn't come here LAST YEAR, too. :P:P:P:P"
Do you see what I did there? I put all of your names in your quotes! :D
But anyways, sorry....I couldn't think of a better way to portray you guys...and sorry if I hurt anyone's feelings. :(
Yeah, it's not gonna be real funny in the first few chapters, as I've said earlier. The fun'll start when some people are evil and perverted. :P can't wait! thanks for reading, too. :D
StOrY!!!
HI GUYS!! LONG TIME TO TALK!! :D
Anyways, I'm writing a story over this summer...(just something for me to do...), and it has most of us in it...sorry if I didn't put you in, but...I just didn't know what role you'd play. I can't just squish everyone in, 'cause then it'd be like those Asian dramas, where everything's confusing. OR "He's Just NOT That Into You".
Yeah, but anyways, it has a WOTW theme....and it's gonna be so cool! However, don't be confused. We don't know each other yet. Like, there's one group of Asians, and then there's another group of Asians. Like, at our school. And then at the end, we end up making one big Asian Posse. :P
So....like I said. Me, Michelle, Gary, and Joseph are in one group. (We needed some pervs in our group for the story. :P) And then Yanan, Alex, Kevin, Mary, Helen, and James are in another group. (BTW: my group is the good guys. :P)
This whole thing takes place in the summer, so there are like, no missing children signs or whatever. We're all going to nerd camp together...for the whole summer...so no parents become paranoid or whatever.
Anyways, Kevin was at nerd camp the summer before the story, and he invents this thing...and it accidentally turns on when Alex is..in it, and then he becomes all evil alieny. Then he forces everyone in his group to go in, and then all become evil alieny, too.
Anyways, then those six capture my group ('cause we just happened to walk by at the wrong time...), and we're their hostages/prisoners/people.......and they want to take over the world...
However, something goes wrong, and then we all get to go back home for the school year. :P
Yeah, I already have Chapter 1 and 2, and those will be posted soon! :D READ IT!!
Anyways, I'm writing a story over this summer...(just something for me to do...), and it has most of us in it...sorry if I didn't put you in, but...I just didn't know what role you'd play. I can't just squish everyone in, 'cause then it'd be like those Asian dramas, where everything's confusing. OR "He's Just NOT That Into You".
Yeah, but anyways, it has a WOTW theme....and it's gonna be so cool! However, don't be confused. We don't know each other yet. Like, there's one group of Asians, and then there's another group of Asians. Like, at our school. And then at the end, we end up making one big Asian Posse. :P
So....like I said. Me, Michelle, Gary, and Joseph are in one group. (We needed some pervs in our group for the story. :P) And then Yanan, Alex, Kevin, Mary, Helen, and James are in another group. (BTW: my group is the good guys. :P)
This whole thing takes place in the summer, so there are like, no missing children signs or whatever. We're all going to nerd camp together...for the whole summer...so no parents become paranoid or whatever.
Anyways, Kevin was at nerd camp the summer before the story, and he invents this thing...and it accidentally turns on when Alex is..in it, and then he becomes all evil alieny. Then he forces everyone in his group to go in, and then all become evil alieny, too.
Anyways, then those six capture my group ('cause we just happened to walk by at the wrong time...), and we're their hostages/prisoners/people.......and they want to take over the world...
However, something goes wrong, and then we all get to go back home for the school year. :P
Yeah, I already have Chapter 1 and 2, and those will be posted soon! :D READ IT!!
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